Hi Brianna, My name is willow and I really liked your blog post on mind your tone. The part that stood out to me was that you realistically emailed. Did you think about when you made it an animation could you do it faster? To improve I think you could make the slides go by faster and make the presentation shorter as it is 208 slides!!! Please visit my blog at https://pcswillowp.blogspot.com/
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Hi Brianna, My name is willow and I really liked your blog post on mind your tone. The part that stood out to me was that you realistically emailed. Did you think about when you made it an animation could you do it faster? To improve I think you could make the slides go by faster and make the presentation shorter as it is 208 slides!!! Please visit my blog at https://pcswillowp.blogspot.com/
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