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Friday 17 August 2018

Improved pet report

Conference with Miss G

14.8.18
Purpose: to inform people who are looking after pets
Audience: me (Miss Gallagher)


RT: introduction- the points you are going to discuss/talk about
Paragraphs- each about one idea
Conclusion- like the introduction but after your writing

Introduction:

Do you want a pet? Well I can help with that! To look after a pet you need to feed it,
give it attention and exercise.

Paragraph 1  feeding

Every animal needs feeding


You should feed pets every morning and night. If you feed your pet then your pet will stay
healthy. Your pet will get there daily scroce of protien.This one you probley know SO THEY
Won't STARV you also feed it the right food or it will get sick.
For example if you give the animal milk chcolate
they will get really  sick but if you give it dark chocolate they will die.

Paragraph 2 giving attention

Pets need attention to be able to trust you so they don't run away
Pets need to be loved so you can cuddle it so when you go to them  they won't growl at you.
Pets need attention so they can be happy and stay with you and your family.
You should get some toys too.

Paragraph 3 excersise

You excersise your pet by walking. They need excersise to keep strong and healthy so they
won't end up lazy.You train to there mess outside. it helps to preent it from training them
later and don't have to pick the mess  For example you'll be able to exercise


Conclusion

This has explained everything you need to know how to look after pets.

1 comment:

  1. I can see how you have learnt to structure paragraphs! You have highlighted your topic sentences, explain and example sentences.
    What would you do next time to improve your report?

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