I am a year 6 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kauri Hub.
Wednesday, 30 August 2017
My rain writing
As i can hear the raindrops hitting the ground. I say to myself, we are nearly home a few more minutes to go. I can feel the wet slippery umbrella stick. When I smell the cold air goes up my nose. I can see the trees going swish swash side to side I can hear the hail going boom! Boom! I feel nervous inside because I don’t think i can make it home. I can taste the fresh air I am sucking in. π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§
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